Personal Narrative, Oct 2010

The Michigan Soccer Game

I went to a Michigan soccer game. One of my friends came with me. First, we rode the bus from the parking lot. It was a yellow school bus. There were a lot of people.

Next, we got thunder sticks and a Michigan soccer poster. Thunder sticks are like balloons that you bang together. They were very loud. The poster was also cool.

Finally, we got our seats. The crowd was excited. The game began. The crowd was extremely loud. Michigan started with the ball. After a while my friend and I got pizza and candy.

The game went into overtime. At the end it was a tie game. It was very late when we got home. I was glad that I got to go to the soccer game.

Poem

The Drizzle

Drip, Drop!
I hear the sound of water.

Pitter, Patter!
Do you hear the sound of rain on the roof?

Splish, Splash!
We dash through the puddles!

It is very wet and gray.
It is a drizzly day.

Bubble Trouble

Zeke's Bubble Trouble Book Report

Grace is trying to get into Jane’s bubble club. Grace really tries to blow a bubble. But Jane tries not to include Grace in the club with all her rules. Her big brother Tom tries to cheer Grace up. Finally Jane lets her in the club.
I like it when Jane lets Grace in the club. This is a good story because it’s funny and the problem is good.

Jacob's Soccer Game

Jacob’s Soccer Game

By Zeke

One afternoon Jacob was at his soccer game. Jacob was running swiftly after the ball. WHAM! A player from the other team bumped him. This made Jacob mad. He punched the kid. The ref blew the whistle. He held a yellow card up. Jacob stomped off the field. His friend Matt came over and said,” What’s going on Jacob ?”

“That kid pushed me and the ref didn’t call it,” said Jacob.

“Woa...” Matt started to say.

“I just hate soccer!” said Jacob

Matt said, “That isn’t true Jacob. You were doing the right thing on defense.”(not when he punched him)

“ I just don’t think I am really good,” yelled Jacob.

“Come on Jacob there scoring. We need you on defense because you’re so good.” Said Matt.

“I am encouraged enough Matt. I’ll tell coach I am ready.”Said Jacob.

When Jacob is in the soccer game he goes up to the boy and said,” I’m sorry for punching you.”

“ I’ts ok.” Said the boy.

The game ended right when Jacob scored. He went over to Matt and said ,“ Thank you Matt. You’re the best friend.”

After the game his dad took him to Dunhams to get a new soccer ball!